Next Right Moves

I might need to elaborate on some things or even add whole new pieces of storytelling to the paper. Im about 50 words short of the 1250 needed. Although, I feel like I have elaborated pretty good on everything. That is why I need another opinion from my partner today in class. Hopefully they can see what I don't see and tell me where I may need to add more stuff. 

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